Bulking or supplementing?
Let’s say you have written hefty novella (as I have) and submitted it (as I did) to a publisher who wants novel-length works (as he did). The story is complete with beginning, middle and ending. The story arc is complete. How do you make a 45,000 word thing an 80,000 word thing without repeating yourself? Here’s my approach:
First, I make an Excel spread sheet listing every scene and its page number so I can go right to the insert points.
Second, I look for the following:
- Lengthy exposition without dialog and I find ways to insert dialog.
- Inadequately described people or settings and I describe them.
- Cold descriptions and I insert emotion or internal dialog.
Third and last, if all else fails, I invent new characters or situations. This is the trickiest part since it can reveal itself as ‘padding’ unless the new situations are relevant to the story. Otherwise, a reader could be led up a tributary and end up thinking, ‘What was that all about?’
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